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AngelofPeace

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It's a boy dance party. \ U.U /

Delicious!

Get on the floor and JAM!

The vocals are beautiful. Unfortunately they're drowned behind everything else.
Bring 'em forward, beef them up, make them clearer. proJECT 'em!

Theledge93 responds:

I gotcha, if i made them any louder, they would have drowned out the kick and snare. they lost considerable punch if i mixed the vocals any higher. i'm just not pro enough with an eq and compressor yet.

Dang...this really grows on you.
Somebody's going to use this in a Papa Louii/Mario/Fun 2D Flash Platformer Game of some kind, I can tell you that right now.
By the way, yOUR cAPSLOCK iS oN, sIR.

Tarteviant responds:

thanks :3

Needs...I dunno, more effort? Less trap? Both?
Well, you get out what you put in, I guess.

Thanks for the free giveaway. We really appreciate your generosity!

YouriX responds:

Haha your welcome im just happy you like it xD

Eight and a half minutes is a long time for the same thing over and over. I get what you're trying to do here, it's just that it's a little repettative, using the same instrument the whole time for every single part of the melody. I guess I would suggest a second synth or a trumpet or something...just anything to spice it up a little bit.

Because if you think about it, people's attention spans can't handle 8.5 minutes of anything anymore. So, nice song, good feeling, just needs a bit of a tune-up.

Quite a toe-tapper. It seems to be missing a little something, though I'm not really sure exactly what it is.
Still, it's pretty good. Kudos!

Wow...okay, good job, I can tell you really put your heart into this attempt...
But make sure you find your range and stay within it. And when you sing, you have GOT to proJECT.
If you're keeping it quiet so as not to disturb the people in the other room (or the other houses in the neighborhood) that's not going to work. You have to yell on key, especially with something this difficult to sing. When they sang this at the Disney recording studio, they weren't being quiet.

Good try, though. :)

Mau3000 responds:

I wasn't being quiet, I swear hahaha
I really don't give a damn about my neighbors.

The technique I'm learning on my vocal classes regards the projection of the voice from behind your head to your top mouth and nose. The problem with this is that non-experiment singers tend to be incapable of building presence towards high pitch notes. You're right about it and I shall keep practicing.
About my range, this song is a little bit above it (about 1 tone), but I'm pretty sure I'll be able to reach it with no problems if I keep practicing!

Thank you for the advice, I'll keep working hard!
It was a good try, wasn't it? hahaha

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